Palm Floral
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Beach
So called the beach,
it's worth to reach,
the sea is shining,
the currents are combining,
dawn has now arrive,
each moment is live,
the winds have blown,
tropical palms has grown,
this sea grew lighter,
as light grew brighter,
sand has been cool,
there's no such pool,
present endless moving waves,
lasting sight to crave,
damp is the shore,
sure there is more,
with oceans so wide,
less to be hide,
corals on the ground,
sounds that all surround,
none has experienced immortality,
for this is reality,
so many seashells lay,
on this sunny day,
this excellence of moral,
with undried aromatic floral,
lots of animals there,
and creatures to beware,
some are sincerely mild,
others are unexpectedly wild,
free birds shall fly,
as fish swim by,
midday has come near,
the sky is clear,
so light this breeze,
is the peak of ease.
....where would I start? Minus one,and rewrite! Tonight! While the lamp is bright! Or trite! Or the bedbugs bite!
International Flower Design Exhibition 2010 Royal Palm Pkg By Akmal Somroo
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